week 3 class 1

Regarding feedback from my piers on this poster I  presented  there was some doubts and confusion  on what it was about
I can see where there coming from , I need to work on some more clear and ideas to convey, The background image is slightly confusing and quite irrelvant to my idea, which is about the bottom percentage in New Zealand get brushed away and overlooked.

I like idea of some tightly croped  eyes which are challeging and intimidating, I will continue exploring some more images and styles around this.  

Left in the dark is an interesting statement that relates to the bottom percent of new zealand who are 'left in the dark' in many senses.  i think the words have potential and I'm making efforts to try and create some interesting text and an accompanying image.